Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
People have a different opinion in terms of the principal purpose of an educational institution such as the university. There are some people consider that the main objective of the college is to educate young people regarding the skills required in the work field. However, others believe that the aim of the universities is just transferring knowledge. I share a similar point of view with the former opinions with the reason outlining below.
There are several reasons why the principal purposes of further education institutions are to transfer knowledge as well as to acquire requisite skills in the workplace. First of all, the collages have a standard curriculum developed to improve students’ skills. They also integrate additional competencies such as communication and language ability to support the students to have the competencies required in working place. Therefore, graduates from the university have a complete competency and ready to take part in the workforce.
Secondly, the universities have an excellent quality of human resources coming from multi discipline fields which do not exist in other educational institutions. The university students are supervised by competence lecturers having broad knowledge in both practical and non-practical skills. Thus, the students are able to acquire knowledge from the experts in their fields. Lastly, many universities also have an internship program aiming to give real working experiences and gaining a skill can be applied in the future job for the students.
To sum up, due to having an excellent educational programs as well as competence human resources, university consider as the ideal place to train young generation about all skills demanded in the workplace.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 51, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'program'?
Suggestion: program
... due to having an excellent educational programs as well as competence human resources, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5447761194 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08273095129 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5307369101 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.307692308 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176783911301 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653302309893 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364605584071 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109078644108 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349675485754 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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