Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world sports has emerged as a highly paid profession. Famous sportsmen and women earn even more than Doctors nowadays. While some people believe that it is justified other’s are of the view that it is unfair to other important professions. In my opinion it is justified. Analyzing the popularity aspect of sports and a short professional career will prove our point.
Firstly, not all the sportspersons get high sums of money for their performances. It is highly variable and depends a lot on luck and physical form at a particular time. For example Boxer Aamir khan, who was unbeatable in the start of his career, but with time popularity has decreased and is not earning as much as he was doing before. He was paid a lot for his popularity and liking initially which has significantly reduced nowadays. Thus short span of times of popularity justifies the high incomes.
Secondly, almost every sportsperson has a very short professional career. For a footballer the maximum professional span is for ten years. Most of them look for alternate jobs and invest in other businesses for money. For instance many cricketers in Pakistan has resided to do cloth business as a source of income. Thus lack of regular income and financial support helps to prove our stance in favor of high pays for sportspersons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9730941704 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94121865185 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7667930658 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9333333333 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8666666667 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15934110692 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588616951494 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100053363488 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131820232401 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135621763683 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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