Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The significance of teaching children to become good members of society which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others disagree. However, a small number of people believe that parents should take responsibilities to learn children about become a good member in society, where other individuals feel that school is the best place to teach. In my opinion, at home is the best place to learn good behavior which is more will logical. This essay will elaborate both aspects along with examples in the looming paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays many parents concern to teach children good manner. In addition, parents can be instructed children easily with some activities. To take an example, children are always like to fellow father and mother and try to do all works as like as parents. So, if people do good works in society, children will be learned properly. Furthermore, parents should meet all relatives with babies regularly which is a good way to teach them how to communicate with each other. Thus, parents should be played a great role for children which will help to make them qualified person.
On the other hand, school should take some steps to teach students about well manner which will make them a perfect person in society. Moreover, a student can learn basic rules along with academic studies such as social work, Kindness, help to people and so on. Therefore, learning such kind of rules are very effective to teach become a better person.
To sum up, according to the arguments one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of teaching children to become a respective person in society are to indeed too great. However, parents should be more concerned to teach babies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9898989899 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55974202721 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4550327247 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346962121969 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1245082458 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671431471631 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207770411567 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744541025079 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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