Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe, that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The significance of teaching children to become good members of society which was always debatable have now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others disagree. However, a small number of people believe that parents should take responsibilities to learn children about become good members in society, when other individuals feel that school is the best place. to teach this. In my opinion, home is the best place to learn good manners, which is more will logical. This essay will elaborate both aspects along with examples in the looming paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays many parents concern to teach children good manners. However, parents can be instructed their child easily with some activities. To take an example, children always like to fellow. father and mother and are more also try to do all work are like as parents. So, its people do good works in society, children also will be learned about it. However, parents should meet all relatives. with their babies regularly, which is a good way to teach be good members. Thus, parents should be played a great role to best things in children's mind, which will help to make good person.
On the other hand, school also should take responsibilities to teach students about well manners, which will make them a perfect person in city. Moreover, a student can learn basic rules along with academic studies such as social working, good manners, Kindness, helping pent people and so on. Therefore, learning some rules, which are effective to teach become a good very more person.
To sum up, according to the arguments one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of teaching children to become good person in city, which are indeed too great. However, parents should be more concerned to teach babies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03986710963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52031404193 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521594684385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7924693034 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329546515961 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118088142868 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620017839158 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211699888574 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717762826519 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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