Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The issue raised in the question is a bone of contention on which opinions may vary. Among these various points arises the concept that families are the place where people can learn how to be good civilians. Diametrically opposed to that, some people put forward the view that teachers are supposed to turn them to help people. Although both sides may present equally valid arguments to support themselves, the former view holds more appeal for me.
From another perspective, some defenders of the other sentiment contend that kids spend about three fifth time per day at school. Adolescents should be educated throughout that time. Additionally, parents allege that they pay for the children to be edified, both thinking and behaviors. In my opinion, although these rationalizations sound rational, they are only one-sided.
A plausible implication which lends support to this point of view is that parents are believed to guide their children to deal with the society. This is mainly owing to the fact that kids are more likely to obey their kindred than their acquaintances. Equally, parents are the first teacher, and, as they say, learn young, learn fair. Toddler, just like a little tree, should be bent when they’re young. Children should learn basic moral disciplines like respect, obedience, and honesty. Basic life skills should also be taught at a young age so that ankle-biters can imbibe them.
The education first starts at home. An individual’s personality and qualities form from things he/she learned as a juvenile. Hence, the things that teenagers learn from their guardians have a lasting impression on people. Parents should be careful when teaching their children the moral values and responsibilities. Youngsters, as a natural occurrence, mimic their families and thus, they can be taught to be good civilians.
Nevertheless, many parents don’t have enough time for their kids since they have their ever-increasing business outside. In this case, the teacher plays an important role in their student’s social development. Some pupils listen to masters they adore and follow their instructions like the written law. Thus, tutors contribute greatly towards teaching the morality and responsibilities to teenagers.
In a nutshell, with all the evidence throughout the discussion, both standpoints carry equal strength and significance and neither can be refuted outright. However, personally, I’m more in favor of the proposition that home is the right place where children can learn to be good dwellers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fair'
Suggestion: to fair
...r, and, as they say, learn young, learn fair. Toddler, just like a little tree, shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4335839599 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94800770521 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.637237094 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.72 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.96 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301128815412 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760710720847 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572156406585 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146497676537 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459171306479 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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