Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the widely discussed issues nawadays is education of young generation. Ii is undeniable that upbringing children has become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement on whether parents should educate children how to be well-socialized members of community or teachers can be more succsessful at teaching youngesters various social skills.
A commonly held belief is that teachers educate youth people more effectively than parents. As evidence of this they point to teachers' proffecional qualification which they get learning pedagogical and psycological aspects of education, Furthermore, in generall, teachers spend a lot of time with children of different ages and social statuses and have an enormous practical experience of communication.
It could be explained by the fact that school is the place where teachers using various pedagogical and practical methods solve a lot of conficts and misunderstandings between classmates. As a result, it leads to a facsinating effect of socializing young people through learning at class with groups and developing useful skills like leadership and tolerant attitude.
On the other hand, some people claim that parents are the best teachers. For example, they can mention that parents get to know their children from childbirth and aware their personality better and much longer than anyone else in the world. This factor helps to mother and father work at children’s weak points throuought children’s entire life. Furthemore, parents can teach how to love and carry about their siblings or how to be responsible.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that parents have more opportunities to educate young people to cope with different social problems and teach essential family values and develop useful and healthy communicating skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61130742049 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18738492221 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.831554086 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.363636364 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223839365847 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805436625898 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532603799138 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12742037462 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052098454253 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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