some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays many people hold the view that children should be taught to be a useful people for the society by their parents while there is a body of opinion claims that the teachers of the school may be the better choice to help children grow into an important part of the society. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the debate to seek the conclusion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that children can receive more scientific and authoritative knowledge from school since teachers there have been trained formally and the teaching materials are provided by the government uniformly.In addition, the children can improve their academic performance cause their enthusiasm of learning may be motivated by the competition among the peers.
On the other hand, however, parents can find more appropriate and unique teaching methods for their own children because they do not need to teach many students like the teachers in the school. Furthermore, parents can discover their children's negative emotions in time and confront them for the reason that children are more willing to communicate with more familiar person such as parents. Meanwhile, the teachers may can not take care of every student feeling simultaneously.
To summarize, there is no doubt that that learning in the school can offer children more standardized knowledge and improve their study skills. At the same time,however, children can be taught more suitable and obtain enough attention from their parents. In the final analysis, therefore, one can only conclude that school should be the better choice for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19844357977 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70595642698 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.9858988885 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.444444444 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232193893699 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101651908408 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652629771348 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154854125032 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643513587633 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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