Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Essay topics:

Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As human race has entered a new era of social development, more people are considering paying taxes is sufficient for making changes into society, some others opine that there are more ways to take responsibility. This essay will outline both sides before stating my own opinion.
Initially, paying taxes is highly valuable not only to the government but also to the society itself. For instance, officials tend to allocate money to societal reforms that is more crucial to make changes. Secondly, there are many business owners, private sector to pay taxes that is adding extra credit to budget o country itself. Thus, these arguments prove that paying taxes should be enough for citizens to make reforms.
On the flipside, country dwellers owe another responsibilities to cover society need. Firstly, they can participate to rebuild roads,bridges that is neccessaty for their life. Whatsmore, everyone can implant new plants and trees to make their city incredible one. There are countless projects can boost city vibrancy and add color by helping hands of people.
To sum, despite some people states that taxes is enough for increasing living standards in their residence, but as it mentioned above there are many alternatives to meet society needs and make a difference.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24390243902 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71526409976 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673170731707 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.857794363 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7272727273 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285860554935 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948439501049 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713859192717 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162807676112 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607617338376 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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