Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In sport, there are various opinions about which factor is required to make the sportsman become superiority. One opinion prefers physical strength, while others claim that mental strength plays a vital role. From my perspective, combining physical and mental strengths will provide powerful energy to boost the sportsman's success.
In terms of sport, for long ago, people are used to the fact that sport is any subject based on the sportsman's outstanding fitness background, and matches are places for the competitors to display their noticeable strength and skills. Moreover, all of the athletes' records are based on their physical strength achievements, such as how fast, strong, and flexible they are. Thus, every athlete devotes their time to work and train hard to build up their physical fitness.
Nonetheless, the lacking mental strength of the athletes can interfere with success in sport. With regard to the antagonistic matches, when the competitors are approximately equally talented, the winner may not always be the stronger ones. As a matter of fact, some athletes with firm stuff and spirit can make the miracle come true. By contrast, a person with weak psychology can sometimes make some small regrettable errors, causing the victory to slip away, regardless of their genuine ability.
Hence, in my opinion, the perfect contribution of both physical and mental strength is what the athletes require to temper themselves. The success will come when the competitor has the ability to defeat their opponents without meeting any negative effect of psychology.
In conclusion, the outstanding fitness background is one of the requirements, whereas stable psychology is a sufficient factor for the superiorities.
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Suggestion: tempering; temping
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45724907063 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84444195644 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1101032512 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244353253323 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881698904078 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794014813355 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124667351023 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749962521185 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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