Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that being physically strong provides better chances to succeed in sport than those who have higher intellect. This essay agrees that for some particular kinds of sport it is simply necessary to have physical strength and it is more important then mental one. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that all sportsmen that belong to specific sport categories such as adventure, aquatic, extreme or mountain sports should have strong physical skills of their bodies, namely strength, dexterity and endurance. That is to say, participants using those skills, can lift, push, pull or carry heavy loads and be able to perform physically exhausting activities without problems. It is therefore agreed that having physical strength is important to succeed in those kinds of sport. Such sport category as strength and agility is main example, where physically strong sportsmen become successful winners.
However, many disagree that for successful sportsmen it is indispensable to have considerable physical strength, great dexterity and power of endurance and think that having mental strength is more useful. This is because that people prefer mind sports such as chess or mahjong to physical exercises. Despite this, active sport is one of the most valuable activities for humanity and for children especially. For instance, a 2019 study found that morning exercise is one of the foundations of a positive physical development throughout people lives.
In conclusion, while some people think that the best kind of sport is mind sport and for it people need to have a particular type of the intellectual ability, other people disagree with this and believe that mind sport is not relevant to real sport where sportsmen usually demonstrate strength, dexterity and endurance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34965034965 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69090872745 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527972027972 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7293403302 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393008001175 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144165551975 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08544379195 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246036394143 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442568364879 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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