some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world.other people,however,believe that scientists have the greatest influence.discuss both of views and give your opinion.
Role of political leaders and researchers in motivating the people have always been a topic of controversy.Many people believe that polititions have a crucial role in society,whereas,others are of the opinion that scientists have a greatest influence on the society.Both these perspectives are analyzed in this essay before coming to a conclusion.
On the one hand,politicians have the power to formulate policies.These people are the one who are elected by people to lead them,hence they have the right and responsibility to direct citizens.They are policy makers.Additionally,political leaders work for the welfare of citizens,which is considered as the main role of these people.They have a vision for the world.These people are nominated by by the citizens,as a result they have a positive impact on society.Moreover they are considered as role models,so people tend to follow these leaders.Again politicians are great communicators and they are able to make a friendly relationship with people.
On the other hand,one of the argument put forward in favour of scientists role in influencing people is that, many of the inventions made by them are aimed at improving the standards of people.These people influence citizens to conduct their daily life by the use of modern inventions,like computers.
After analysing both perspectives in detail,I would consider that,political leaders have more impact on the society.
To conclude,although inventions have helped scientists to influence the world to a great extent,it is the politicians have the power and ability to influence people and they are influencing people in many ways.
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'whereas', 'as a result', 'on the other hand', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272084805654 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.187279151943 0.155533422707 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0742049469965 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.017667844523 0.0501214627716 35% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0353356890459 0.0437548338989 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148409893993 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0530035335689 0.0403226058552 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.94433534656 2.80594681477 141% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0388692579505 0.0326793684256 119% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120141342756 0.0861772015684 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00353356890459 0.021408717616 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00706713780919 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1641.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.59036144578 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385542168675 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293172690763 0.28420135186 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244979919679 0.203846283523 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.204819277108 0.137316102897 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.94433534656 2.80594681477 141% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.037074148 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502008032129 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.8789914096 60.7387585426 77% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 49.8 20.7743622355 240% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 180.782078758 49.517814964 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 328.2 127.492653851 257% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.8 20.7743622355 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.6 0.814263465372 196% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 3.99599198397 701% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 79.1172690763 49.1944974215 161% => OK
Elegance: 1.97058823529 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465946054349 0.332605444948 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.232189925466 0.102741220458 226% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131856707105 0.0668466124924 197% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.4323767778e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.313285914397 0.134430193775 233% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762427540933 0.0742795772207 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.254880186583 0.324371583561 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.140132315607 0.0638462369009 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313285914397 0.228012699653 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762427540933 0.058150111329 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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