Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
The required qualities to become a successful person is one of the top social concerns. In fact, it is difficult to define a successful life. Usually, in the notion of the vast majority of citizens, success involves to a material possession. Yet, there are available some get unique definition of successful life. Their lives lack of wealth but they own knowledge, happiness and specially, the satisfied about their life. Thus, I partially agree that having university degree is not the determinants of being successful people in these days.
Definitely, we can not refuse that having a university degree is essential you choose your career in a profession such as law, medicine, engineering, etc. Moreover, attending to the university studies, you will approach more chance to improve your specialize knowledge. It is not only consist of learning in classes, you can also ask your professors or your tutors after classes. In more details, keep in touch with your classmate in the university will help you to expand the relationship network in profession after you graduate.
In contrast, there are various ways to approach success. There are some people who get big by operate their own business. They learn from books and life experience. Actually, these people took risk pursed the dream. For example, the Michael Dell, CEO of Dell Corporation, Inc,. dropped out of college to materialize his idea. Absolutely, people who successful after drop out their studies in college are geniuses in their field of work.
To sum up, university education is not play an important role if you want to be successful as the days before. Anyway, it just only true if you can control your life effectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: possession
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...chael Dell, CEO of Dell Corporation, Inc,. dropped out of college to materialize h...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dropped
...el Dell, CEO of Dell Corporation, Inc,. dropped out of college to materialize his idea....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in contrast, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12230215827 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83621175098 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4592819066 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9473684211 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197554157728 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588523545071 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450995214869 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114316314013 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345552841548 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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