Choose an existing product business or service and describe its features

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Choose an existing product, business or service and describe its features.

The continuous research and improvement of services in the hotel industry is essential because of the high competitiveness on the world market recently. In order to meet the convenience needs of customers, many investors have applied automation technology to their businesses, which must include the "big" of world trade industry: China.

As an inevitable trend, China's Alibaba Group officially inaugurated the FlyZoo hotel, which operates on artificial intelligence (A.I.) and robots, computerizing many procedures such as check-in, room service, and lighting control on December 18th, 2018. FlyZoo in Hangzhou, capital of Zhejiang province, where Alibaba is headquartered, is considered the group's first future hotel, Xinhua reported. The significant feature if guests can use facial recognition – rather than keys and keycards – to access the hotel.

290 room-hotel FlyZoo Hotel was built with 290 rooms by Alibaba's online travel platform, Fliggy, along with other Alibaba Group business units, such as Alibaba A.I. According to Radii China, rooms in A.I. hotels have seven different topics related to countries around the world. For example, the room with the theme "England" has many British flags, pictures with Big Ben clock tower, etc. The room price is about 200 USD. This real estate project may leverage cutting-edge tech to help transform the hospitality industry, one that keeps the sector current with the digital era we are living.

Besides, guests adjust electric lights, T.V.s, curtains in the room by voice commands for Alibaba's digital assistants named "Tmall Genie”. If they want fresh water for the room or new pillows, goods will be delivered to the guest room by the robots. Guests can easily book and check out rooms with just a few touches on the mobile screen through application software.

This business model is a testament to the high applicability and incredible development speed of the software industry. By the economic benefits that it brings, the application of software technology to the commercial industry will be the trend of the times. According to Wang Qun, FlyZoo's CEO, the A.I. system helps to increase management efficiency, reducing more than half the workforce: "AI-based solutions can save customers time and staff. Hotels do not have to do repetitive jobs," Global Times reported.

FlyZoo is the latest example of China's major technology corporations going into traditional ways like hotels and tourism. In July 2018, Baidu partnered with Intercontinental Hotel Group in Beijing to allow guests to use a voice-controlled assistant to adjust the room temperature and book room services easily.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 492, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...Hotels do not have to do repetitive jobs,' Global Times reported. FlyZoo is th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, so, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2290.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55825242718 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00606183685 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628640776699 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1523845673 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.222222222 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0320119231699 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0107902091929 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183683576917 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0187407292394 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00945533832776 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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