Choose an existing product, business or service and describe its features.

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Choose an existing product, business or service and describe its features.

As a country at the forefront of the technological revolution, China possesses many unique services integrated with advanced technologies. Typically, Chinese Investors have launched the hospitality industry using facial recognition and robotization technology throughout the facility. Grand hotel and pioneer in this field is the FlyZoo hotel under the project of the Alibaba Group.

The hotel is located in Hangzhou, China, which is the major economic and tourist hub of the country and also where Alibaba is headquartered. Opened on December 18, 2018, the 290-room hotel made a big splash among the domestic media. According to Radii China, rooms have seven different topics related to countries around the world. For example, the room with the theme "England" has many British flags, pictures with Big Ben clock tower.

The distinctive feature of the service is the hotel integrates artificial intelligence and robots to perform most procedures such as check-in, check-out, room service, and lighting control to save time and labour. Guests adjust electric lights, T.V.s, curtains in the room by voice commands for Alibaba's digital assistants named "Tmall Genie." Customer requests for room service as cleaning, new pillows will be handled by virtual assistants, the orders will be transmitted to service robots and delivered directly to customers. Customers can easily book and check out rooms with just a few touches on the mobile screen through application software. In particular, instead of using keys or key cards to access the hotel, FlyZoo applies facial recognition technology, evaluated high security and privacy for customers.

This project is a driving force for the development and signalizing the transform of the hospitality industry in the digital era we are living. The business model that Alibaba applied is a testament to the high applicability and incredible development speed of the software industry. According to Wang Qun, FlyZoo's CEO, the A.I. system helps to increase management efficiency, reducing more than half the workforce: "AI-based solutions can save customers time and staff. Hotels do not have to do repetitive jobs," Global Times reported. By the economic benefits that it brings, the application of software technology to the commercial sector will be the trend of the times. FlyZoo is the latest example of China's major technology corporations going into traditional ways like hotels and tourism. In July 2018, Baidu partnered with Intercontinental Hotel Group in Beijing to allow guests to use a virtual assistant as the hotel's standing staff during their stay at the hotel.

The FlyZoo hotel, owned by Alibaba China Group, is a landmark for the rapid development of Chinese trade, proving China's position in the international market. Using robots in hotel services has appeared in Japan a few years ago, but facial recognition is still a relatively new form. That makes FlyZoo significant.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 517, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...Hotels do not have to do repetitive jobs,' Global Times reported. By the economic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, for example, in particular, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2529.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53391684902 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99816158575 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 176.041082164 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577680525164 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 784.8 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3185790223 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7619047619 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0364189103109 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0108866285196 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196698254069 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0224416883587 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146336442397 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 78.4519038076 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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