The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
<span id="docs-internal-guid-dd41a7f0-7fff-75a6-dea0-c5c446daeabe"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">The given chart compare the figures of the survey carried out of 100 000 random Uk residents about the purpose of their travels and the areas which they choose for their trips for 4 years since 1994. </span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">In general, the majority UK citizens tend to travel aboard in their holidays and Western Europe is the region attracted vast variety of visitors during 4 years of the survey. </span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">According to the table, there are a growing tendency for UK tourists to visit abroad. At the begin of the research, it only collected over 22,000 surveys. In a next year, the amount of surveys marginally decline approximately 500 units. Then, the figures have a positive sign in 1996, it increases to almost 25,000 and steadily increase during the period 1996-98. </span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">It can be seen that the second chart shows a significant difference of 3 regions. The total of people who went to North America and Other Areas just only takes a quarter of UK residents travelled to the West of Europe. In 1994, the first year of this survey, while Western Europe attracted about 220,000 UK citizens, the number of UK visitors go to 2 other region are under 2500 people. Specifically, it peaks at approximately 250,000 UK visitors in 1998. </span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">To sum up, the UK residents ten to go to Western Europe and their destination from 1994 to 1998 is travelling or having business trips.</span></p><div><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"><br></span></div></span>
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1405, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tendencies'?
Suggestion: tendencies
...rding to the table, there are a growing tendency for UK tourists to visit abroad. At the...
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Line 1, column 1450, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ncy for UK tourists to visit abroad. At the begin of the research, it only collected over...
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Line 1, column 2390, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'region' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'regions'.
Suggestion: regions
...the number of UK visitors go to 2 other region are under 2500 people. Specifically, it...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while, in general, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2838.0 965.302439024 294% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 337.0 196.424390244 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.42136498516 4.92477711251 171% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.7686306236 2.65546596893 406% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486646884273 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 283.868780488 247% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.45097560976 145% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 470.003473717 43.030603864 1092% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 405.428571429 112.824112599 359% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.1428571429 22.9334400587 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0750081457291 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513044926834 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0160090599714 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750081457291 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.3 13.2329268293 320% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.54 61.2550243902 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 6.51609756098 296% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 10.3012195122 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 32.44 11.4140731707 284% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 71.0 11.4329268293 621% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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