The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
You should write at least 150 words.
The investigation results of sampled cross-section of people who were inquired if they took a trip abroad and the reasons for taking the trip from the year 1994 to 1998 is revealed by the table. While, their landings over the given period is shown in the bar chart.
Overall, it was evident that people migrated for diverse purposes (holiday, business, visit to friends and relatives, other reasons). The main reason for commuting was holiday while the least was other reasons. Also, North American was most visited by the people.
The cumulative figure of people that travel with different intents was 22072 in 1994, however, the value declined by 318 after a year, after which the value grew throughout the given year to its highest value of 28,282 in 1998. Holiday being one of the purposes witnessed similar trend, the value decreases by 344 from 1994 to 1995, before progressing rapidly to its peak of 20,700 in 1998.
Conversely, the number of people who travelled to North America in 1994 was slightly below 20,000, the value depreciates minutely in 1995, afterwards, there was a considerable increase to almost 25,000 over the given period . Also, slight variations was noticed in the tour to western Europe and other areas, although, Europe received the least visitors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... 1994 to 1998 is revealed by the table. While, their landings over the given period ...
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... for diverse purposes holiday, business, visit to friends and relatives, other re...
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...rent intents was 22072 in 1994, however, the value declined by 318 after a year, ...
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...eclined by 318 after a year, after which the value grew throughout the given year...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1320754717 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49687587203 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6532688594 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.888888889 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184097490608 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736507658422 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729729129865 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11720931849 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901474424713 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.