People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Rest is essential to healthy living. In recent times, there is a significant reduction in the period at which people sleep compared to the times past. This could be as a result of some reasons which be examined in this essay as well as its aftermath on the people and their acquaintances.
There are several reasons why people are deprived of rest. Perhaps, the most indisputable being stress. People experience stress in their day to day activities. The major source of stress in today's world is work-related. For instance, eighty percent of people working in Federal institute of finance reported that they sleep for less than five hours a day due to long working hours as revealed by the survey carried out by the center for active minds. The minds and body of these people are actively engaged by work, that they rarely take time to rest.
Consequently, this pattern of rest is deleterious to their physical and mental well-being. Lack of adequate rest endanger people's lives and render them vulnerable to systemic and cognitive disorders. Due to prolong mental work performed by them, the lack concentration, coördination and the ability to process information promptly, thus affecting their relationship with their loved ones. For instance, about 65 percent of hypertension cases recorded in Lagos University Teaching Hospitals was attributed to lack of rest, as reported by the Center for disease control. The rate at which these conditions are getting rampart is devastating as it is avoidable if people can take enough rest.
In conclusion, deprivation of rest is caused by stress, this trend however has diverse depleting effect on the physical and mental health of an individual
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19133574007 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82686925269 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0835091627 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194678795316 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646651412717 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507332675311 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118568149166 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413351396505 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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