Some people think that the government should take care of the disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless people.To what extent do u agree or disagree
It is generally believed by some people, that catering for the less privileged is the responsibility of the government. While i disagree with this notion, i opine the government empowers the needy so they can afford a comfortable life for themselves.
To begin, one of the sole responsibilities of the governing bodies is to contributes immensely to the welfare of the community, by supporting people with low socio-economic status. As such, lot of funds has been invested in providing for the homeless and the unemployed. However, some people take advantage of this generous acts and refuses to engage in productive economic activities that can aid their growth. In this quest, the nation's treasure was exhausted to tackle this distressing situation. It often makes people dependent and expect all their needs to be met by the government. It is imperative to understand that resources of the country will not be distributed evenly, as some people are at the favour of the governing bodies. Taking responsibility for these people will not only indulge them, but will also impact the nation's economy negatively.
Consequently, empowering the needy and adequate provision of job opportunities would serve a good purpose compared to catering for them. Provisions of seminars and workshops that enlightens them on how to set up a profit-making business will yield positively. Will this also improve the economic status of the country? Certainly yes. The level of workmanship of the nation will be strengthened. In addition, the government should grant them funds to start a business or provide loan with little or no interest. Also, subsidizing house rents will make house affordable to the less privileged. This strategy will not only make them independent, it will likewise help them to sought-after a comfortable life.
To sum up, the role of the government in sustaining the community is substantial, nevertheless, i disagree with the opinion that the poor should be financed, because this will make them independent and less productive. Instead, they should be rendered financial aid and empowered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, then, while, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35820895522 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15585500402 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558208955224 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9271372835 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153320887023 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470155485843 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446352427732 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975519055178 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658479291742 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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