You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown
The graph depicts the number of employees ( men and women) in six different employment sectors (manufacturing, communication, financial/banking, wholesale and retail trade, public sector (defence), public sector (non defence) of the republic of freedoma in the year 1975 and 1995.
Overall, the value of male workers outnumbered that of the female workers in 1975. Also, the public sector (non defence) has the highest number of workers. The year 1995 took almost similar trend except for the difference in wholesale and retail trade, and communication sector which value of women exceed that of men.
The number of workers in the manufacturing and public sector (non defence) for both gender remains unchanged over the given period of time ( women- 300, men ‐ about 650).
A significant change was revealed in wholesale and retail trade and the communication sector. The value of women in the communication sector increased from about 250 to almost 550, while that of male remained the same (350). Also, the value of women in wholesale and retail trade plummeted from 500 to 800 but the number of men (700) was unchanged over the given period of time.
In addition, the number of female employees in the finance/banking sector and public sector (defence) increased from 100 and 50 to 450,100 while that of male employees rose from 450 to 500. In contrast, the number of male in the public sector (defence) declined from almost 210 to 200.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he graph depicts the number of employees men and women in six different employmen...
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...gender remains unchanged over the given period of time women- 300, men ‐ about 650. A sign...
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... unchanged over the given period of time women- 300, men ‐ about 650. A signif...
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...er the given period of time women- 300, men ‐ about 650. A significant change ...
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...of men 700 was unchanged over the given period of time. In addition, the number of fem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, except for, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08438818565 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76719270756 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430379746835 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4496364403 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179807641667 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895712978909 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482932618502 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12069367255 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385677766799 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.