The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.
The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.10.06 10.26 10.16
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The table illustrates the survey result of a 100,000 UK citizens, who answered whether they visited overseas and the purpose of the visit for the period of 1994 to 1998. The bar chart depicts their destinations such as Western Europe, North America and other areas for the same period.
Overall, it is apparently seen that substantial number of UK visitors been to other countries to spent their holiday while the number of visitors were relatively low at the purpose of business, visiting friend and relative and other reasons. Western Europe was their most interested place.
In 1994, 22,072 tourists from UK had visited other states whereas majority went to spend their holiday that is just over 15,000. Business travel, visit of friends and relatives were 3155 and 2689 respectively. These two were around 2000 and 3000 throughout the period while, other reasons not exceeded 1100.
The bar chart reveals highest number of travelers went to Western Europe, which was almost over 17,000 over the period. North America and other areas had insignificant number of people compared to the Western Europe. Which were just around 2000
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 15, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'reveals the highest'.
Suggestion: reveals the highest
...s not exceeded 1100. The bar chart reveals highest number of travelers went to Western Eur...
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Line 13, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... people compared to the Western Europe. Which were just around 2000
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, so, whereas, while, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39486911976 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.5837650732 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188918460137 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783209832282 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675282663907 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124941017252 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817600657376 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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