Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Most of the adults either use radios or satellite televisions to keep themselves updated with latest issues. While a television brings more life to a news bulletin due to the presence of the video content, this essay would argue that radio is ultimately superior because of its portability.
The television viewers might argue that they are able to understand news better as they can see the pictures and videos during a news bulletins. For instance, a weather report on a news channel is easy to comprehend as the climatic conditions are displayed with the help of graphs and visual effects; on the other hand, understanding climatic conditions only by listening to a radio is a laborious task. This ease of comprehensibility makes satellite televisions popular among viewers.
However, I would argue that radios have their own benefits. Firstly, a radio set is a standard feature in most of the car nowadays; drivers can listen to the news while they are on their way to work. Obviously, it saves a significant amount of time for working professional as they do not need to sit in front of a television to be aware of latest issues around the world. Secondly, the additional time that the listeners have saved can be utilized by pursuing their hobbies or spending some quality time with their families. Therefore, a radio set is a convenient and time saving option when compared with televisions.
To conclude, watching a news report coupled with audio-visual clues can be a better experience, but it consumes lot of time. Since most of the people in hectic work schedules radios are a great option for those who wants to remain updated with the global issues compromising on their personal or business commitments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... televisions to keep themselves updated with latest issues. While a television brings more ...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...they are able to understand news better as they can see the pictures and videos du...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
... can see the pictures and videos during a news bulletins. For instance, a weather repo...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...it in front of a television to be aware of latest issues around the world. Secondly, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98961937716 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87920047597 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56401384083 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4252775121 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183165639534 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683067980396 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309713161473 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114723023629 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025191738343 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.