A person should never make an important decision alone. Give reasons for your answer and include any example.
Life is an intricate process, which involves numerous moments of making vital decisions. In my opinion, one should take into consideration others’ opinion while making such crucial decisions as the advices of experienced individuals might help a person to take appropriate actions during a predicament.
Taking suggestions from others often helps a decision maker to form a right opinion. This is because during a difficult situation one is obviously under enormous high stress due to which it gets hard to comprehend the situation effectively. If decision makers listen to other individuals opinions it would help them to clearly understand the complexity of the scenario and help them to make right decisions. For instance, in many western countries the judges usually take into consideration the advice of jury members before giving their own verdict.
Apart from this benefit, taking advices from one’s acquaintances provide moral support to them which eventually elevate their self-confidence to act on their decision. For example, when my cousin Khyati was going abroad for her tertiary education, she asked for advice from her trusted friends to form an opinion. During these conversations, most of her friends were in accord to her decision which boosted my cousin’s confidence and went on pursuing her tertiary education. In contrast, without having moral support a person may feel left out and this might affect the person’s decision making capability.
In conclusion, while making vital life changing decisions it is always sensible to involve others because it would help one to make the right choice and also increases their confidence to pursue in the right direction.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94458304852 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1037791591 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158174273923 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639497351892 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433854432565 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999477080157 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254603535768 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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