Technology plays a pivotal role in helping human work more effectively .it is often argued whether the robots are beneficial for human development or it has negative effect on people.In my opinion although there are enormous advantages of robots but it has demerits as well.
First and foremost advantage of robots is the speed and precision .due to high speed and accuracy of machines all the work can be done in a less time which would lead to increase in productivity.to cite an example all the large and complex calculations are solved on the computer quickly.
Moreover robots can be utilised in dangerous and difficult situations.As the work of mining and drilling are arduos to be performed by human beings.therefore robots are being used in such complicated circumstances. Moreover robots are proven to be successful in saving lives of people in warfare as well.
On the flip side ,the mankind is also affected adversely due to automation as it has contributed to unemployment among youth.Most of the jobs are done by computers which were performed by humans before . Another negative aspect of computers is that data stored in the computers can be hacked due to which secret information can be leaked which can go in wrong hands .
To incapisulate , it can be stated that benefits of the robots cannot be ignored but government and people should work together to find the solution how to diminish the negative effects of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96228272942 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579166666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0802640432 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.857142857 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2857142857 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118121061618 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622816409158 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458676735484 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738135613684 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494643563223 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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