In the contemporary era, youngsters migrate from the villages to the urban areas for the purpose of getting education or finding job. There can be multifarious reasons behind this phenomenon like pitiable living conditions, poverty, scarcity of employment in the countryside. From my perspective, although there are some drawbacks of this migration, however, it is advantageous for the youth as they access quality education and variety of employment opportunities in the cities.
The first and foremost reason behind the aforementioned trend is that life in the villages is not convenient and comfortable which is totally different from the cities. Majority of people are dependent on agriculture as it is a prominent source of income for them. But it is a seasonal occupation and they remain unoccupied for several months. Therefore, they are living an impoverished life and are unable to even afford basic necessities. Thus, such circumstances drive them to move to metropolitan areas.
The major advantage of living in the cities is the availability of numerous education institutions providing a wide range of courses so the students have innumerable options and they can choose the subjects of their interest. In these organizations, the highly qualified and experienced staff are employed and they impart education by making use of advanced technology like smart board. They also teach students by preparing presentations in the form of slides. Furthermore, means of employment are also more in the cities as compared to the countryside. Since there are industries and factories are installed, these generate jobs for the people. In a survey, it is found that unemployment in the villages is 10 percent higher than that of cities. Nevertheless, major disadvantage of the cities is the environmental pollution which results in numerous health problems.
To encapsulate, it can be stated that if problems of cities are resolved, then this mutation will be proved to be beneficial for the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...shed life and are unable to even afford basic necessities. Thus, such circumstances drive them to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, as for, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41587301587 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18791494762 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1683915338 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0640828163447 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0200937673571 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.017189568362 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0348241706265 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206972340767 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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