Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In modern society, people has struggled to a countless issues. It is believed that researcher should examine the ways which we can use to tackle with health problems, while others gravitate toward dealing with others imperative ones. From my perspective, I concur with the latter mindset due to several reasons.
Admittedly, world health problems have been one of the most significant matter that people need to address by means of finding new methods to save human life.. First, there have been a soaring in the number of people suffering from diseases which can give a death toll to human health and even be fatal. Take the Covod-19 pandemic as an example, almost all countries in every continent have been infected with this epidemic and a myriad of them lose their life, resulting in an increase in the demands for novel vaccines or cures. In addition, should people are able to foresee the hidden diseases and find prior efficient ways, patient will be cured. For instance, monkeypod have been commonplace in Vietnam these days, and only when hospitals have medicines will this situation be alleviated.
Howerver, apart form concerning about heatlth, education and environment should capture human’s attention. To begin with, education plays an pivotal role in human lives. Individuals have been trained with high-quality education, facilitating the development of their country by means of devote their knowledge and experience to make society better, giving rise to numerous inventions related to health problems. By providing knowledge for residents, they will support to their country in efficient ways. Moreover, enviromental pollution are becoming worse and human-induced are prime cause of environmental degradation. Governments should publish rules to prohibit the damge of human into the surroudings and scientists reseach methods to improve and recover people ecosysem.
To sum up, in my opinion, despite of the fact that health problems should be dealt with in this day and age, there are a variety of crucial problems such as education and environment have been also solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35951661631 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75247312189 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616314199396 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0799408284 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.266666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12709070848 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419240611462 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041420617365 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856950924083 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229343156662 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.