Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays education is one of the most crucial role in development of each nation. Remarkably there are people who believe that a sense of exam in children should be stimulate and others may think that children who are taught to interact rather compete become more useful adults. This essay below will analyzed about this argument.
To begin with, sense of competition is organized to classify the ability of student and seek out only one victory in the main role. Likewise, becoming a winner is a huge motivation to stimulate a child’s effort and practice their ability more sufficient day by day. For a while, to conquer is the instinctual configuration of human, in general, a sense of competition is unquestionably the way to improve children’s ability. Oppositely, losers dislike the negative feeling when they stand in shorter place than their peers. In addition, a sense of competition in all situation it is not the best way to training children at school.
On the other hand, I virtually concur with supporter of ideas that children who are taught to co-operate rather become more useful adults. Children in the age for training and discovering both the world and their ability need to impressed to the cooperation. For example, Japan is the pioneer to teach their young generation about working group and thinking about community. Each five-year-olds japanese child not only can take care of themselves but also sharing their belonging for their peers to co-develop. This is true that a society development is community that every individualistic has a good income not only unique person.
In conclusion, a sense of competition is good method to accelerate children motivation but it is not the best solution. Education should be emphasized into the cooperation to teaching a new well qualified generation for future society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in short, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19333333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99227895313 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563333333333 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2060035811 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326174975938 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10059500882 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144433886001 0.0667982634062 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197620365829 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960350168919 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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