today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays in open business environment there are a lot of people believe that the high sales of common consumer goods indicate the power of advertising and not the true needs of society in which they are sold. To be honest I agree with this issue and this essay below will analyzed virtually about this.
To begin with, theoretically the goods can be categorized into two types are necessary and not the real needs. In particular, the useful commodities are easy to sell in every sale systems even private store and briskly receive a lucrative money. Because of these reasons, the daily using categories become popular every where. Unlike, not the real needs products are rarely performed in the store just incase an expert store. Generally, these items are just produced in a small number.
Remarkably, we are unaccepted the power of the advertising in business. For instance, advertising is on of the most crucial role to sale commodities in a lot of companies today. They pour a huge of funding into introducing their products to the consumers easier by television, internet, radios and papers. Formerly, a best qualified commodities are just speared by mouth, so the business sphere becomes to restrict. Nowadays if a normal products have a right adversiting plane it will become succesful but in return it will dacline with a good commodities lack of advertising. In addition, the advertising is the best way to consumer can be reached the products.
In conclusion, albeit the qualification is basic criterion of products, however, the products can be enlarge obviously depend on advertising plane.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'analyze'
Suggestion: analyze
...th this issue and this essay below will analyzed virtually about this. To begin with,...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'lucrative money'.
Suggestion: lucrative money
... even private store and briskly receive a lucrative money. Because of these reasons, the daily us...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...e daily using categories become popular every where. Unlike, not the real needs products ar...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ON_OF_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
... business. For instance, advertising is on of the most crucial role to sale commod...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... internet, radios and papers. Formerly, a best qualified commodities are just spe...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...comes to restrict. Nowadays if a normal products have a right adversiting plane it will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11363636364 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86371652926 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0721656321 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236295111887 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704661787385 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861499730289 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127757845981 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086827494539 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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