Some people argued that should be motiveted to the children to involved in a competition for made a brilliant adult, other hold the view that to made more qualitative adult children should be needed a cooperative knowledge and habit. I want to fully support the first statement because by the competition children get chance to boost their ability.
On the on hand, it is sure that to developed the creativity and better ability in child, competition is one of the best way for the them. Moreover, child would be highly concentrate on their competitive work even they always think how to be winner and be a talent than other. Accordingly, that would be developed the one qualified adult as well as talented person. For instance, by the speech competition, children would be got chance to developed a debate skills and always be curious and to search special content and valuable information on varieties of sphere for this competition, that would be made epxpert fluent speaker.
On the other hand, someone disagrees and hold the view that children should be have cooperative knowledge for their future life. Coperation is the best part of a human beings, because we are social beings we should be lived in societies . Although, to survived in communities in better way people should
be ready to help and colaboration in every activities of communities. By the prosperous relationship and socialization, that would be possible to construct gigantic societies and countries. For example, in our country Nepal, government have already mentioned the social subject to the primary level, it is good job for development the colaborative value on students.
To recapitulate, that have no doubt, competition is the precious way for the creation of capable and an extraordinary person however, that wouldn't fufilled need of societies if person might be success on their life but they may not have helpful and collaborative mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13015873016 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95240105807 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2213362452 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225853185388 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891339351382 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741867952315 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131716714913 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917160443079 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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