Some people argue that universities should be offered the parallel number of a boys and a girls students in each subjects. Personally, I agree with this because to establish the gender equality and grown the involvement of a women in all sector.
First of all, I believe that should not be gender discrimination in all sphere and also educational institution. By the gender unequality the door of knowledge of the women would be closed. They are restricted to take the higher education by the cause of gender. However universities should be given the equal chance for both of them to installation the gender equlibrium. In order to universities should be made a stick policy for enrollment process of students. Furthermore, that have same contribution of a men and a women to development of nation. So that should be need the to educated the women likewise a men.
Another reasons why I believe that to grown the involvement of women in all sphere it mustly needed paralled education. That have extremely low participation of women than men. For instance, in political and business sector the proportion of male and female have hugely contrast. Honestly, education is the key factor to produce qualitative manpower. Therefore, in order to be the success and achieve the goal education have great role for that. Eventhough to reach the top level of any field, they should be found the proper education and gain the knowledge. Although If women will get the appropriate education, they might be lead the nation and socities.To analyse this all causes education should be equal for all.
In conclusion, although education should be equivalent for both a men and a women, to established the gender equality. However education has great role to grown accessibility of a women in every sphere.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...r equality and grown the involvement of a women in all sector. First of all, I belie...
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Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...equality and grown the involvement of a women in all sector. First of all, I belie...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. By the gender unequality the door of knowledge of the women would be closed. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...igher education by the cause of gender. However universities should be given the equal ...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: MAN_MEN[1]
Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...rmore, that have same contribution of a men and a women to development of nation. S...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...hat have same contribution of a men and a women to development of nation. So that shoul...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n and a women to development of nation. So that should be need the to educated the wome...
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Message: Did you mean 'needed'?
Suggestion: needed
...evelopment of nation. So that should be need the to educated the women likewise a me...
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Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a man' or simply 'men'?
Suggestion: a man; men
...need the to educated the women likewise a men. Another reasons why I believe that ...
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Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...ed the to educated the women likewise a men. Another reasons why I believe that ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'contrasted'.
Suggestion: contrasted
...oportion of male and female have hugely contrast. Honestly, education is the key factor ...
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Suggestion: To
...y might be lead the nation and socities.To analyse this all causes education shoul...
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Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
Suggestion: man
...ucation should be equivalent for both a men and a women, to established the gender...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should be equivalent for both a men and a women, to established the gender equal...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...hould be equivalent for both a men and a women, to established the gender equality. Ho...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...en, to established the gender equality. However education has great role to grown acces...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...as great role to grown accessibility of a women in every sphere.
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
... great role to grown accessibility of a women in every sphere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, honestly, however, if, likewise, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05033557047 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96000736818 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513422818792 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2075948775 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6111111111 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120708340647 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424855504546 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437702171474 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091479131173 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440727672792 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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