The given table compares the consumer durable of household in Britain families on their owned technical appliances of 11 years commencing from 1972.
In general, the most popular electronic item in Britain was television while the least owned household appliances were diswasher during this period.
As can be seen the given tables, the TVs and vacuum cleaner were always popular in UK they have consumed 93% and 87% respectively in 1972 and they had appeared 98% and 94% repectively in 1983 although, the figure of both has rose. Likewise, a similar ownership pattern of both appliances refrigerator and washing machine in British familes. Central heating has made double during this period. Meanwhile, the video has introduced in 1983 with only 18%, the least popular appliance diswasher has 3% only in 1978 and inclined 2% in 1983. Interestingly, the consumption of telephone has 42% in 1972 and it appeared 77% in 1983.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ain was television while the least owned household appliances were diswasher duri...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'appliances'' or 'appliance's'?
Suggestion: appliances'; appliance's
...se, a similar ownership pattern of both appliances refrigerator and washing machine in B...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lar ownership pattern of both appliances refrigerator and washing machine in Bri...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ern of both appliances refrigerator and washing machine in British familes. Cent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15894039735 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76724530796 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635761589404 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3216114087 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143079029893 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631190832156 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648276763087 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112019861142 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684742114424 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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