Children are expected to experience competition either at school or in the society. Be conscious of fierce competition is necessary, but I would a agree have an adverse impact on children’s ability of cooperation.
The main purpose of academic competition is to stimulate children’s enthusiasm for study from a young age. unlike adults, children are not aware of the importance of learning, and competition can offer children the chance to realize how to survive in future society. For example, in a rivalry, peer pressure force children to work hard. Rankings after examinations enable children to understand their efforts on study. Without effective competition, children may lose the motivation to study, which would cause quite bad results in their later life.
However, there are some concerns that competition may have a negative influence on cooperation. They could become more selfish and self-centered. Children who heavily focus on competition may be not able to cooperate with others, which does harm to their future careers. For example, they may be not know how work in a group and get along with others. As a result of competition, they are unlikely to achieve success in adult life.
In my view, globalization pushes people to cooperate with others. Now the world is becoming smaller and more linked. Regardless of the reasons why people compete for, win-win situation is the tendency. That means, competition does exist, however, cooperation weighs the same place. For example, China’s one belt, one road represents the emphasis on cooperation.In conclusion, the sense of competition is quite useful at an early age, which equips children with motivation to progress. However, in the future, children should be aware of the importance of cooperation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e competition is necessary, but I would a agree have an adverse impact on children&apos...
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... represents the emphasis on cooperation.In conclusion, the sense of competition is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38214285714 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07059581734 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0316822879 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7222222222 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236268438413 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746396814853 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374321364472 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146261289455 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231911451224 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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