As a result of modernize, noise is regarded as one of the most annoying problems in people’s life. Moderate noise is acceptable, but if too much noise would have an adverse impact on other people’s life.
On the one hand, noise pollution poses a threat to relationships between neighbors which represent the highest decibel of noise should be limited. One problem associated with too much noise is that it can interfere with their neighbors’ normal life or work, imposing an increasing possibility on quarrels. What makes it worse is that no uniform regulations or laws to deal with noise problems. That means people who have to bear the noise find it difficult to look for an effective way to manage this issue. For example, awful renovating noise in the early morning or at midnight can wake up the neighbors, which may provoke a fierce quarrel or even a violent fight.
On the other hand, making noise also a freedom relates to human rights. People have the basic rights to release their stress by making loudly sound. People who are totally obsessed with the sound are unable to realize how loud the sound are. For example, when people are involved in a concert, they will yell as loud as they can to show their love and support to the singer.
In my view, keeping the noise in a controlled range shows the basic manner to other people. Excessive noise can not only affect one’s hearing, but also a pollution to the surroundings. In order to make a friendly environment, every one should make an effort on noise pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
.... On the other hand, making noise also a freedom relates to human rights. People have th...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pollution'.
Suggestion: pollution
...nly affect one's hearing, but also a pollution to the surroundings. In order to make a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, for example, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8127340824 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67139147141 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4465126445 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.7857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187251806988 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713325899519 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036961512137 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122096039953 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170466126734 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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