Some people believe that space exploration is not important because it is a waste of human resources, while others argue that it is important for humans to continue to explore the universe in which they live. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion on the former viewpoint.
To begin with, those who argue that space exploration is a waste of resources because it requires a huge amount of investment and additional risks Firstly, investing money in space exploration might be useless because there is a very low probability of getting breakthroughs in space. Therefore, it is better to use money on ongoing problems on earth. Secondly, private organisations already spent their huge amount of investment on space development, so there is no need for the government to spend tax payers' money on space exploration. For example, Elon Musk, founder of SpaceX, spent more than 100 billion dollars on space development, but still the American government spent 20% of their state budget.
However, some argue that space exploration is essential because it helps human beings live better lives. First and foremost, because of the launch of different types of satellites in space, humans could enjoy navigation technology, weather telecasts, wireless technology, and so on. Furthermore, space exploration creates employment opportunities and advances in technology. In other words, the launch of rockets and satellites provides brief information about unseen minerals and elements that can be useful to create new electronic gadgets, and making rockets and satellites requires more individuals, so it increases the employment rate.For instance, a survey conducted by the Italian space agency revealed that 45% of survey respondents gave priority to space exploration because it helped them in terms of living with advanced technology and was also helpful in decreasing unemployment.
In my opinion, space exploration is important for every nation as it helps them develop faster. Along with that, it also helps to know more about upcoming problems on Earth.
In summary, although space exploration demands more investment and other additional risks, human life and technological upgrades could be better with the help of space development. I reckon that space exploration ought to be necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in summary, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41712707182 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94641588441 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.445244205 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.071428571 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7857142857 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288901160256 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110838404599 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898979478673 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184138702563 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108465258173 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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