Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Nowadays, many school teach life skills are opened. Some parents decide to choose this type of school for their children. But in Vietnam, the number of parents who have that thought don't much. Old generation still thinks that children should be focus on learning important subjects as: Maths, Science,..... And Vietnam still has a prejudice that children learn in the skill school often don't well at studying. So that many parents don't adopt their children learn in this school, they think they will be embarrassed with relative, friends, neighbour,.... And I think we shouldn't have much aggressive about this topic because where you learn must not the most important things decide what you do when you grow up.
The first opinion and have the many endorsements is should learn at the school have spent on much time to learn important subjects. In the past, the people have successful and become famous often came from schools have the highest quality of learning. Teachers have taught in these school always very good and have a very high degree. The parents have been comfortable when their children have studied in these school . The qualifies from these school often are prefered because of the learning standard on it. The students who graduate on it often have a foundation and knowledge about specialized better. The skill schools often command talent and the percentage have innately talent really hard to find. To learn basic subjects often easy to find a job after graduating. And that is the normal ambition with many parents and students of Vietnam. They choose a safe choice and a smooth career so this is nothing strange
But some people are in opposition to it. General, who have this thought often is the people have a big dream, extremely they have innately talented. They don't want to as same as with the normal thinking. They desire many things and they don't have a hesitate thinking when face with the mission of it. I really like the persons who can do it. But this is very hard and they can't guarantee their future. So that they often can't convince parents, friends,.... Despite that, nowadays many young children can think can do and they can win the pressure. They deserve to have admiration. I hope they can have an agreement with families and friends.
In conclusion, I want to paraphrase that we should not have negative thoughts with this opinion. Children should choose what they want to do and don't make them have a bad feeling and pressure with their choice
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun school seems to be countable; consider using: 'many schools'.
Suggestion: many schools
Nowadays, many school teach life skills are opened. Some pare...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...number of parents who have that thought dont much. Old generation still thinks that ...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'focused', 'focussed'?
Suggestion: focused; focussed
...on still thinks that children should be focus on learning important subjects as: Math...
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Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ng important subjects as: Maths, Science,..... And Vietnam still has a prejudice t...
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Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hildren learn in the skill school often dont well at studying. So that many parents ...
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Line 1, column 432, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... well at studying. So that many parents dont adopt their children learn in this scho...
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Line 1, column 549, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...rassed with relative, friends, neighbour,.... And I think we shouldnt have much ag...
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Line 1, column 570, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
... friends, neighbour,.... And I think we shouldnt have much aggressive about this topic b...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
... opinion and have the many endorsements is should learn at the school have spent o...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ir children have studied in these school . The qualifies from these school often a...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...because of the learning standard on it. The students who graduate on it often have ...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and knowledge about specialized better. The skill schools often command talent and ...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...emely they have innately talented. They dont want to as same as with the normal thin...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nking. They desire many things and they dont have a hesitate thinking when face with...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y desire many things and they dont have a hesitate thinking when face with the mission of ...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n do it. But this is very hard and they cant guarantee their future. So that they of...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rantee their future. So that they often cant convince parents, friends,.... Despite ...
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Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...hey often cant convince parents, friends,.... Despite that, nowadays many young ch...
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Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... should choose what they want to do and dont make them have a bad feeling and pressu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, well, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87089201878 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39166833872 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460093896714 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.241101744 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1071428571 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16188548049 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514108973068 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565895668642 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110754372923 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524738273574 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.