It is debatable that, cooking skills are extremely important for scholars as well as they definitely know about the food related process that how to prepare it. on the contrary other argue that academic subjects are more beneficial as well as valuables for tutees. I will discuss both view as well as elaborate it in my upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, first and foremost; food, clothes and shelter is a basic needs of human. Some schools have a different kinds of subjects, Apart from basic subjects. Due to fact that, these subjects are becomes student innovative as well as self dependent. To explain this, students interest in food as well as cooking then they do not need any other person for in cooking purposes. They also learnt to spices, equipments which are used in cooking process. Even they know about the nutrients such as minerals, vitamins as well as fibres extra. In addition to, when students cooking at their home as well as any other place, then it create bounding with their friends circle among with relatives even also they gain respect from others for their creativity and innovation.
On the other hand, with this skills, academic study in separate subjects also more valuable for undergraduates, due to fact that, without learning subject student as well as anyone cannot survive in contemporary era. In competitive word individuals become knowledgeable in any field, because they have a learning skills as well as a communication which attract to other people. For example, if scholars do not learn about subject such as a psychology and other subjects then totally did not know about this what it is, these day are common as well as a major problem which seems to be in alternative that is a stress and it is related to our body and mind. Without learning this subject, students cannot handle this problem. Consequently, along with cooking skills, learning academic subject are equally valuable for all scholars.
To conclude, in competitive word, no one survive without cooking skills as well as academic subjects, due to fact that, both have its own benefits which become people more innovative as well as creative in their further life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...es for tutees. I will discuss both view as well as elaborate it in my upcoming paragraphs....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...laborate it in my upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, first and foremost; fo...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'kind'?
Suggestion: kind
...of human. Some schools have a different kinds of subjects, Apart from basic subjects....
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Message: Comparison is written "as cooking 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...nts interest in food as well as cooking then they do not need any other person for i...
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Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...ome as well as any other place, then it create bounding with their friends circle amon...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... innovation. On the other hand, with this skills, academic study in separate subj...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to subject'
Suggestion: to subject
...tes, due to fact that, without learning subject student as well as anyone cannot surviv...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: LEARN_NNNNS_ON_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to'?
Suggestion: to
...ld, because they have a learning skills as well as a communication which attract t...
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...lly did not know about this what it is, these day are common as well as a major problem w...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are equally valuable for all scholars. To conclude, in competitive word, no one...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...its which become people more innovative as well as creative in their further life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99725274725 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61154227636 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502747252747 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6531784741 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158802770293 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060565585285 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296757472359 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999758066441 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427215294454 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.