Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that digital life makes everything to become. While some people believe that the best way makes their life to become easier than before that giving up the use of technology. However, I disagree with this view because of some reasons.
On the one hand, some people argue that due to the development of high technology which makes their lives are complex more than in the past because people who cannot understand and catch the trend of the technology. For example, older people who cannot use a smartphone or even though they do not understand how to use a simple cell phone. Besides, spending too much time play smartphone which also brings some negatives for people such as restriction their verbal skill with others.
Nevertheless, I believe that this opinion is quite ridiculous because everyone is living in industrialization to promote developing technology. First of all, technological advance has some positive because they make their own country become modern and wealth. For example, many developing countries all over the world, they always focus on the offer and improve technology in many fields. If any countries do not catch this trend, those countries can be lagged behind compared with the world. Finally, it is clear that technological advance has made human life easy-going to a great extent. For instance, people can receive plenty of money through their bank account or they can use bank transfer for others that without going out, this made their life is safe and easy.
In summarize, while technology sometimes has many negative effects, I believe that people have benefited a lot from technological advance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...igital life makes everything to become. While some people believe that the best way m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66431264142 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1218558096 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27946545832 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101728224835 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649544517493 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174942865043 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762273108287 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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