Some people think that there are benefits in going to private secondary schools. Others feel that private schools can have negative effects on the society.
Discuss both the view and give your opinion?
Few individuals believe that there are many advantages of opting the private institute to complete secondary education; however, counterargues claims that choosing non-grant aid schools could have negative impacts on the community. The argument consists of dual perspectives. Prior to my inclination, both the viewpoints are discussed further.
On the one hand, there are several benefits provided to children by private schools. Firstly, there are various types of modern facilities are being provided by institutes which make it better place to learn. For instance, better infrastructure, transportation facility, security and healthy food. Secondly, these schools are facilitated with highly trained teachers who offers world-class teaching. Moreover, multifaceted development of student can be achieved, as private schools have designed their curriculum in such a way that it offers a many extracurricular activities and games along with necessary learning.
On the other hand, a faction perceives that choosing private school may affects the society in a negative way. To begin with, these institutes demands a colossal amount of tuition fees. Hence, only a few sections of society can afford it. Furthermore, some schools have predefined targets and goals. As a repercussion, they may focus on desired examination results instead of delivering required education that could compromise pupil’s future. many schools, for example, are observed to give unnecessary homework and burden of extra activities. Additionally, to maintain discipline such organizations have strict environment that may affect children detrimentally.
To conclude, it can be stated that private secondary schools have both positive and negative aspects. Although affordability and some unwanted education practice could be issues, I believe that the private institutions are beneficial for the society because it provides modern facilities with higher education standards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01067615658 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15337433698 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.3113563869 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3529411765 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267781935916 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796446167997 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827686387238 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163729846261 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298307156681 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.28 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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