It is often argued that representatives of young generation ought to continue their education with university degree, while others hold that they should be enticed to be part of physical demanding employment. This essay will consider whether junior people are more beneficial to the society in the higher education institutions or whether they favor the interests of society more impactfully by indulging in physical employment.
It is considered by many that young people should obtain at least undergraduate degree before starting their professional life. First of all, each society demands experts in different fields of science in order to predict potential threats that would have detrimental effects on it. For example, the prompt warnings that were made by American economists to reveal the astronomical growth in the toxic assets of investment banks made an indispensable role for government to decrease devastating consequences of 2008 economic turmoil. Furthermore, universities lay the foundation for new inventions to shoulder the heavy burden of life more easily. One clear example is the technological advancements for mathematics software developed by the students of Stanford University, so that the program is capable of calculating 27000 order in a crack. If people had made this calculation manually, they would have demanded 4 days to finish it.
However, it is also commonly shared thought that young people should be directed to blue-collar jobs that require manual labor. One important issue is that construction of facilities, namely, bridges, hospitals, schools, etc. play a pivotal role in the communities. Based on the recent research made by well-known business magazine, the construction of bridge in Tokyo led to 10% decrease in the level of traffic jams in rush hours. Moreover, some occupations require specific skill sets which can’t be obtained logically without accelerating practices. For instance, due to recent investigations made by Belgium universities, the most expensive watchs are made manually by masters who have no any academic backgrounds, rather than by mathematical engineers made their degree at top universities.
To sum up, while universities grow potential experts to save their countries for anticipated dangers and higher education seekers sign the appeal of revolutionary technologies, there is also a majority who defends the facts that manual labor by young people is essential to be used for constructions of infrastructure and that by obtaining some skill sets a variety of jobs can be executed. In my opinion, the balance should always be protected; undeniably both white and blue-collar workers are inevitably important for the prosperity of societies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Play
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58072289157 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16716350423 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0165754313 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.75 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202872718831 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622366916677 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663869409713 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131010285043 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506663498816 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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