Some say that children should obey their parents and teachers, while others believe that too much control will not help to prepare children for their adult life. Discuss both sides of the views.
The relation between parents and children varies from time to time and place to place. But the general trend seems to be that children are less likely to obey blindly. This has caused much uneasiness on the part of parents and teachers. However strict control by adults hinders children’s preparation for the later life. There are advantages and disadvantages of these viewpoints
In the adult’s opinion, children have to obey their elders. Raised and taken care by their parents, children should do as they are told to show their gratitude and respect for the elders. This is a tradition in many cultures. Besides, the elders always want the best for their children. No parents would intentionally harm their children and thus there is no point in objecting to their biding. More importantly. Youngsters cannot make informed decisions on their own. Being young and inexperienced, they are prone to indiscretion. On many occasions, they need guidance and advice from their parents and teachers.
On the other hand, too much control is detrimental to children’s future development. Sooner or later, children need to make decisions on their own. If they have been taught to obey orders since they could remember, they gradually lose the ability and desire to form their own opinion. Such children would never be given positions with responsibilities because they are accustomed to following rather than giving instructions. Besides, only a totalitarian society will demand total obedience. It is contrary to democratic principles which take account of all people’s opinions and interests. Tyrannical parents are in danger of starting a vicious cycle: when their children become parents themselves, they also become tyrants.
In conclusion, it is not easy to get along with one’s parents or children. It is unwise to be overprotective or overindulging. As with most things, moderation seems the best policy. Any high-handed approach is likely to breed another generation of tyrannical parents.
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Suggestion:
...other generation of tyrannical parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38924050633 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03861247261 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9086151724 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0434782609 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7391304348 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26086956522 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368901415553 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958686174709 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813170320653 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209837396957 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983217391197 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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