Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day.
Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed that working at home rather than commuting to a workplace on a daily basis would be more effective for workers. In my view, there are both advantages and disadvantages to this working type, which I will discuss now.
On the one hand, home working can bring numerous benefits. Firstly, this type of working is convenient since people do not have to get up early to prepare and travel to work on time before rush hour. Secondly, it can limit some risks that they may face and save themselves on the way to work, such as car accidents or being robbed by thieves. Finally, working from home is useful for some emergency cases. Take the coronavirus outbreak as an example. To limit the rapid spread of the pandemic, the public is required to stay at home; hence, home working will make sure that individuals still have a stable income for surviving during the difficult time.
On the other hand, teleworking would definitely cause major difficulties for humans. The worth mentioning here is that poor Internet connection can ruin the career of a person. To clarify, due to the unstable connection, the important meeting between an employee and the counterpart of his company cannot occur, so the important contract cannot be signed, leading to that person may be fired. Besides, this is a favorable opportunity for cybercriminals to act, who will steal data of the association and use it for illegal purposes such as selling to other corporations or publicizing on social media to demand a ransom. Finally, telecommuting is problematic for managers to supervise their workforce. For instance, if their staff teleworks, the work progress cannot be checked, for employers would not know how the job was done or whether their employees have somebody handle the workload for them.
In conclusion, working at home has some merits and demerits. Therefore, everyone should consider the different aspects of this type of working before applying it to their life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00607902736 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74751189461 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613981762918 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4378676459 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289660959374 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975761658225 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802395880026 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18652315775 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759356257529 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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