Some say that it would be better if the majority of
employees worked from home instead of traveling to a workplace. Do you think
the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?"
In recent years, telecommuting instead of traveling to a workplace has become a broad trend to the general public. Some people believe that the employees who work from home have a variety of advantages. However, others think that it could also have some negative effects. In my opinion, its drawbacks could never overshadow its benefits. Discussed below are several benefits as well as drawbacks of this trend.
First and foremost people recognize that there are many advantages to teleworking. A very important point to consider is that work from home allows individuals to save time by reducing commute time. This means that by decreasing transportation congestion, each employee earns better productivity at work. Therefore, the extra time can be con wed for some activities such as household chores or self-caring their lives become more enjoyable. To illustrate this point, I would like to mention that commuting to work in cities like Delhi and Mumbai, where traffic is congested during rush hours, can be difficult for those who live in remote areas. Another point I would like to make is that the staff's major focus is now working environments such as comfort and tranquility. This is the fact that there is a higher possibility of being overworked at work, which can lead to melancholy and nervousness. Because of it, their mental health will improve to have better job performance.
On the other hand, in addition to the important advantages of this problem, it has some disadvantages. In fact, people have this opinion because of the lack of experience regarding the office atmosphere. This means that working as a part of a team and then gathering for drinks would be never as enjoyable as remaining at home. For example, freelancers who work from home do not have a discussion about the task or conversation in a short bare break. Therefore, they cannot enhance the efficiency in working.
In conclusion, the above-mentioned facts have outlined the benefits as well as the drawbacks of this issue. Its disadvantages should be taken into account. People should take advantage of the pros and minimize the cons of this issue.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05944055944 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92972985659 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.30707923 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165770749892 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506355866652 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307349851066 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101586623844 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535443602534 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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