In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g. literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g. physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed?
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In school and university, different course are being studied. In context to subject , female choose art classes while male usually opt to attend science. This essay will explain the reason behind tending different subject by male and female as well as provides evidence not to alterd this trend. There are numerous reason that support to choices of students in attending varied class.
To begin with,female are more interested toward subject that follow history,patience and discipline. As a result of that, they are influences to choose arts, literature and historu. Meanwhile, male are more keen toward learning new techincal and analytical thing,so that subject like science, physic were choosed by male.For instance,in my owned class girl choose art whereas science by boys.
In my opinion, it is not essential to make any change to this trend. It's because students themselves attend their own subject according to their personal interest,study and passion. Therefore,if they were forced to choose specific course, it would sorely bring negative impact and attitudes in both study and students mind.Futuermore, without depend upon gender,one's must have right to select their favourites course so that they would fell more comfortable.
In conclusion, distinct characteristics of two different sexes: male and female lead to choose subject preference. It provide evidenced that student should given full right to select their classes without being forced.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to art', 'to be'
Suggestion: to art; to be
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...ested toward subject that follow history,patience and discipline. As a result of that, th...
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...ke science, physic were choosed by male.For instance,in my owned class girl choose ...
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...ect according to their personal interest,study and passion. Therefore,if they were for...
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...titudes in both study and students mind.Futuermore, without depend upon gender,ones must h...
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Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...e lead to choose subject preference. It provide evidenced that student should given ful...
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Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
...t provide evidenced that student should given full right to select their classes with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61883408072 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84887195721 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632286995516 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.079576859 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.416666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236708690165 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835940306398 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508077342886 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1399924184 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537847824751 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.