Some scientists think there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Others think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As the dream of reaching space has come true, scientists are now in the quest of life on other planets. However, a segment of scientists believes that it is important to communicate in the form of messages with aliens while others feel that it can be damaging. This essay will cast light on both views before making a final note.
Communicating with extraterrestrials could be beneficial for mankind. The reason to believe that creatures in outer space would be more advanced is their existence before human evolution. So, there might be a common phenomenon between humans and space invaders. If communication gets established then the confusion of peering into the future of planet earth would disappear. In addition, it would not only open new opportunities for knowledge and resources but would enhance the survival of human civilization for longer period.
On the other hand, corresponding with such life forms could be harmful to the inhabitants. As conflicts which include the struggle for power, land, resources, prestige and many other instruments of self-interest are quite common in humans, the same could appear in the nature of aliens. After establishing contact with these foreign lives, they could cause destruction on the planet in the form of enslaving or attacking lives. Retaliating would be futile because they might be far ahead in intelligence compared to humans.
In conclusion, contacting with space species may be advantageous for the human race; nevertheless, it can be damaging. In my opinion, real issues related to the environmental degradation of our planet should be focused on to make life sustainable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30534351145 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04903547536 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4516773732 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293392325908 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996447242198 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524764181698 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179478631508 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397082239833 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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