Sports play a vital role in maintaining a healthy life. However, there are few games like paragliding, bungee jumping, sky diving which could cost human lives. In this essay, I will elucidate the reasons along with relevant measures that can be taken to minimize the risks associated with these games.
To commence with, let us discuss about the reasons on why people participate in such sports. Many people are highly adventurous and are always excited to experience an enthralling moment. Hence, they participate in games like paragliding and bungee jumping, which could endanger their life. Adding further, some of these dangerous games could earn them more money. For example, the renowned heavyweight boxing champion Mike Tyson, earned fame and money at a very young age through this sport. Moreover, in countries like India, as part of traditions, people participate in games like Bull fighting to showcase their masculine strength. Hence, there are lot of reasons for people to get involved in risky sports.
As it is difficult for the governments to ban these sports, they can take some measures to minimize the risk involved in these games. For example, in 2017, when the Supreme court of India banned the bull fight sports in Tamil Nadu, there were large protest around the state forcing the state government to pass an amendment to legalize the sports in PCA Act. Further, the state government of Tamil Nadu arranged medical kits and regulated safety measures to ensure that the injured people get immediate aid. Moreover, as many of these sports help the sportsmen to gain fame and money, a complete restriction would affect these natural talents.
To conclude, people participate in some dangerous games to experience the adventure as well to prove their talents to the world, and governments must make sure they take proper measures to eliminate the risk involved in such sports.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13870967742 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52465264299 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.75717611 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249436591478 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817189686582 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398748279529 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143295374021 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471716700646 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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