Some students found some subjects such as mathematics, Philosophy are difficult, so these subjects should be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays school syllabus has many subjects, while in some countries, it is expanded to 10 subjects. While a portion of students believe that difficult subjects like Mathematics and Philosophy needs to be optional, rather than compulsory. I completely disagree with the statement and this essay will discuss why it is more important.
Firstly, mathematics helps our daily activities. studying equations not only helps our day today life it is in fact improve our mind also. While we look this in deeper, we can realise how these mathematics equations are intergraded in every aspects of the life. As an example, buying products, building houses or farming all most all the professions need mathematical knowledge. Although for some student it is harder than other subjects, but once they enter in to the workforce they will realise the importance.
Secondly, not only mathematics, as a subject philosophy also helps students to think logically. Moreover, logical thinking also helps our life in many ways. Understanding processes, how the nature works or differentiating right from wrong is also important. As an example, while you’re working and you were in a critical decision-making situation, logical thinking will help tremendously. Furthermore, almost all the subjects may think as difficult in some aspects, but the actual benefits are priceless when you are entering to the workforce.
In conclusion, it is difficult to categorize that mathematics and philosophy should be an optional subject when the benefits of it are countless. It is true that for some portion of the students it is difficult but I strongly disagree that wrapping these subjects as optional rather than compulsory. Because as I mentioned earlier, actual usage of those subjects are yet to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Studying
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...day life it is in fact improve our mind also. While we look this in deeper, we can r...
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...ng products, building houses or farming all most all the professions need mathematical k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35587188612 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05097832469 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0030240461 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291790408469 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936197475772 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944186731656 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195639266632 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112264057064 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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