Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university.
Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.
Nowadays, the number of severe crimes are growing year by year. According to some, death sentence is the best solution for this issue, as criminal people will always remain a threat for the community, and that death penalty is economically more beautiful. In contrast, others maintain that there are a variety of punishments for serious crimes other than death penalty. And there might be merit in both views. Yet, in what follows it will be discussed both sides.
Many people think that implementing death penalty is the optimal way of dealing with serious crimes. Firstly, criminals like serial killers will always be capable of repeating their crimes. Therefore, the society will be endangered if these people still exist. Secondly, maintaining a huge number of prisoners is a significant strain for a country's economy. The financial and human resources required for prisons could be utilized in other fields such as health care and education.
On the other hand, a wider section of society believes that instead of death penalty other forms of punishments ought to be carried. Many studies have shown that some of serial criminals tend to regret. Moreover, they become useful citizens for their community. Another reason behind this belief is that there might be some errors in judical system. For instance, statistically one out of five prisoners suffers from a wrong sentence.
In conclusion, some people say that the authorities should use death penalty for dangerous criminal acts. However, others think that different actions need to be taken against crimes, since everyone deserves an opportunity to regret and reintegrate into the society, and that the court might have been mistaken as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33211678832 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58797213385 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9122943842 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9411764706 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259347120901 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082819883332 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047307364619 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164667246911 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391214211967 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.