Some teachers said that it is helpful to do study in group while others believe that it is good to study alone. Give your opinion and describe both the views.

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Some teachers said that it is helpful to do study in group while others believe that it is good to study alone. Give your opinion and describe both the views.

As compared to past years, the pattern of studying among students has changed and the most popular form of doing it comes as the group study. Some teachers believe that it is helpful for the students to learn and study in group, while others argued that it is good to study alone by the students. In my opinion, I totally agree with the first statement because of their advantages which I mention above.

In one hand, studying lonely and individually seems better option because student can have a quiet environment and enough space to stay focused and concentrated over the study for a long time. They do not get distracted by other people and activities, which make sense for them to understand and acquire things carefully. But the fact is today, students get bored and easily depressed by facing their own pressure alone, they get afraid from studies because of feeling like they are not interested and active to keep up themselves manageable for studying personally. However, some students do not have much information about the particular subject and field and need guidance and support which can be solved through group study.

On the other hand, the benefits of group studies are first, students have a lot of resources to share and let it discuss with all the students which is quick way of providing knowledge. Secondly, the students have better experience to learn with the activities and practical approach, if someone make any mistake in the process, the other students put it on right direction to get them know the true way. Additionally, it is helpful when teachers are not available and students can solve their doubts and problems with group study. Furthermore, they have no hesitation to ask anything and they communicate freely with their classmates. It also help them to support good friendships and coöperation to keep them happy and create lesser competitions and stressful situations.

In conclusion, I support that the group studies are very major form of doing studies but it would also have some limitations which is put on to the children's by the parents byconsulting them before allowing them to do group study with classmates.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...study in group, while others argued that it is good to study alone by the student...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ties and practical approach, if someone make any mistake in the process, the other s...
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Line 5, column 645, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...e freely with their classmates. It also help them to support good friendships and co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9861878453 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66043326004 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522099447514 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7198626082 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.846153846 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282450893781 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11222488042 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112959493468 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212309278315 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920402047257 0.056905535591 162% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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