Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
The recent developments in infrastructure show that government is concerned about public welfare and society. The number of facilities provided by the government to the people to make them healthier. In this instance, some people argued that, the best way to improve public health by developing the number of sports facilities. While others say that it would have little effect over people and other measures are needed to make them healthier. I give my opinion after assessing both points of views.
In one hand, playing sports is a quite good way to let people exercise and do some physical activity. This encourages all age groups of people if their favorite sports are available to play in the nearest sports hall. Sports make people aware and more focused on fitness. They also take participation in marathons and social sports activity which is considerably give them excitement and satisfaction. Additionally, it reduces the depression, anxiety and losses sleepover.
On the other hand, people have various hobbies and some people are not interested in sports. They avoid to go sports complex and rather to choose to go for some different physical activity. For example, people who are conscious about their routine health and diet, do exercise in the gym, learn yoga, Pilates and cardio. However, some also adapt to do the practice of Zumba dance for losing weight gain. Furthermore, the squats being a famous trend among people to do for making abs and muscles, which needs so much strength and power. Moreover, most of the exercise nowadays done on machines and equipment which is quite comfortable and easier to do.
In conclusion, I support that sports are not the only possible way to do exercise and make public healthier, the government requires to think about other resources too, like the opening of yoga training centers, installing new types of equipment of gymnasium, providing workshops over maintaining health and fitness. This can attract the people towards making an effort for maintaining a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16180371353 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64552127111 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509283819629 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1912586804 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478860375547 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148162019248 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17780475103 0.0667982634062 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298589417944 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.265930854421 0.056905535591 467% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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