Some think that ambition is a good quality.
Is it important to be ambitious?
Is it a positive or negative characteristic?
Answer question through the lens of your experience.
People like to challenge themselves and achieve great heights in their life in terms of money, career etc. Having ambitions are good for individuals own growth and development of the society. It is good to be ambitious person. This essay will state two reasons why it is positive thing.
Firstly, goal driven person always stick to the path and is ready to do hard work to achieve goal. For instance, two years back, I set a goal to get certified from Human Factors International (HFI). Having HFI certified designer is a mandatory now days. I prepared a time table and followed it for almost 4 months. Due to this commitment I achieved my goal and became HFI certified. Because I was certified I get a job offer from reputed company.
Moreover, after getting job, I was confident that, I can do anything that I want, and achieve any goal with the help of hard work. So I set another goal to get shredded, I was aware that my BMR is 27, which is considered to be obese. So decided to join gym and work on my body, follow strict diet, within 2 months my body started showing good results. I was amazed and again it was proved, ambition drives us and make us do what we afraid to do.
To conclude, having ambition is good and positive thing. People and society can only achieve great innovation or technology advancements, if they are ambitious enough to achieve any goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'day'?
Suggestion: day
...I certified designer is a mandatory now days. I prepared a time table and followed ...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ieved my goal and became HFI certified. Because I was certified I get a job offer from ...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'we're afraid'.
Suggestion: we're afraid
... ambition drives us and make us do what we afraid to do. To conclude, having ambition ...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t innovation or technology advancements, if they are ambitious enough to achieve ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56451612903 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55581553092 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2620964146 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.75 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891851099957 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422191737471 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692648459059 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728441999464 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558457182599 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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