Thesedays, some universities providing Internet-based courses as the alternatives for conventional learning methods. Although this trend might be beneficial to some extent, it would not replace the traditional approach.
In my opinion, Interactive ability and Self-discipline are the main cause of decisive Learning Methods, Traditional learning or online learning. Traditional learning would be absoluterly better online learning about this opinion. Interactive ability of traditional learning would help teachers more understanding students, knowing their Strengths and weaknesses in consequence they would have effective solutions to help students overcome to improve. Moreover, students can ask for their teacher after they answer immediately so lesson is very effective and exciting. For example, when COVID-19 started, I was at class7D, we must study in the Room - An application to support online learning. Interactive ability of Room was very limited so my teacher didn’t care for everyone and we were difficult for information exchange so we studied weakly than normal. For a long time, we stated to go to school, we studied directly with my teacher and meeting face to face. Just a short time we got the original knowledge.
Self-discipline is one of the most important in a lesson. It is higher when we study at the school because teachers can directly observe and manage their students. That would help students focus on the lesson. For example, in my class, sometimes few students private talk, even sleeping in the class. If my class didn’t have teachers, my class would be very terrible. So i can’t imagine how my class will be when we study online learning.
In conclusion, in my opinion we should study at the school with traditional learning it would be more effective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rs, my class would be very terrible. So i can’t imagine how my class will be when...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40569395018 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03889950735 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548042704626 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9759730088 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3529411765 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5294117647 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155985911389 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565162628623 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541727316163 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103709941821 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505637440022 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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